人教版初一年级：Where did you go on vacation?

关键词：Holidays and vacations

话题归类:节假日Festivals, holidays and celebrations


外研版初一年级：A holiday journey

关键词：Holidays, journeys

话题归类:假日与旅游Holidays and Travel



THIS summer vacation, I took a trip to Hong Kong Disneyland.

At Disneyland your dreams can come true. All the entertainments (娱乐) and rides start at 10 am. I rushed towards Space Mountain ¨C my favourite roller coaster (过山车) ride. I got on it, a bit scared. Then the ride started. The carsped (加速) into unknown space. It was dark inside, but suddenly the stars all shone! I could see how stars formed (形成). While I was enjoying myself, the roller coaster suddenly sped up, and went on and on and on?

When I finally got off the roller coaster, my legs were shaking (摇晃) and I couldn't walk straight. I caught my breath, and went to look at my photo taken by the camera there. All I could see was the back of my head, and a ponytail (马尾辫)!

Next was Buzz Lightyear (巴斯光年). I sat in a spaceship and used a gun to shoot the bad toys. They dress up and want to take over the world.

There are a lot of other fun things. I got in a blue honey pot and went into Pooh's dreams and life. I took photos with all the cartoon characters (人物) in front of Dream Garden. I enjoyed Tarzan's magical story in Tarzan's Treehouse.

I felt I was still a cute silly little girl when I was in Disneyland. When I got back, it was past nine o'clock. I think I will never forget this experience.


Wang Rong (汪容)，World Foreign Language School, Shanghai (上海世界外国语学校)


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关键词：人教版 初一 Where did you go on vacation? 节假日Festivals, holidays and celebrations 外研版 假日与旅游Holidays and Travel